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y o u by ~daffodils:icondaffodils:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Experimental > Typographical


theoretically speaking


p l a t o


was insane.

but

                        [here's proof!]

a pen appeared

and i wrote it all down
here

for you to see.

nothing is impossible
there  is

nothing

     we can't be.
©2005-2009 ~daffodils
:icondaffodils:

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:iconselfishlyconscious:
~selfishlyconscious Aug 15, 2005, 3:12:00 PM
Interesting structure which works well.:D I don't have a clue how to structure poems and don't really have the guts to deviate from the norm.
:iconundecided-impulsive:
~undecided-impulsive Aug 19, 2005, 2:27:45 AM
i really, really love it
:icondaffodils:
~daffodils Aug 19, 2005, 4:29:52 AM
thank you, so kind x

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K K
:iconipenumbra:
~ipenumbra Aug 19, 2005, 8:08:10 PM
i love the effect of the stagger... it's a rare skill to be able to force the reader to consider the importance of every word and not just the total image or message (although you do leave this with a sense of wholeness). it really reminds me of lawrence ferlenghetti...
i really like this one, good work!
:icondaffodils:
~daffodils Aug 20, 2005, 5:52:44 AM
thank you, what a compliment :)

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K K
:iconbebopbrain:
~bebopbrain Aug 20, 2005, 8:27:19 AM
the breaks make a very cool rhythm. it makes me think of a jazz saxophonist who is telling a story in unexpected blasts of a horn. i like it very much.
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